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Artistic Flutty by Sokolas Artistic Flutty by Sokolas
I started this drawing as an entry for a certain contest, but was a bit late. So, now the picture is totally unrelated :)
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This critique is mostly about content-details:
Fluttershy has a very lush hair and it's going in front of her face - that way she'll smudge the paint and ruin the mane) You should've picked her hair. She's also looking at the painting by the side her quiff goes down, I think that would bother her in process.
There's no palette/water. The lack of background (hills, trees, mountains maybe?).
And I don't think that easel is steady enough ;)
Also her tail is a bit too broad at the very beginning.
The sun is on behind of her head, yet the glares in her eyes are placed like it's in front.

Критика в основном по содержанию-деталям:
У Флатти, как известно, грива очень пышная и выдаётся вперёд - при рисовании она и волосы себе перепортит, и рисунок размажет) Стоило собрать/подвязать гриву. Плюс она смотрит на картину той стороной, где у неё чёлка опускается, думаю, это ей сильно мешало бы в процессе)
Не вижу палитры/воды, отсутствует дальний фон (холмы, деревья, горы?).
Мольберт вызывает сомнения по поводу его стойкости)
Хвост слишком широк там, где он начинается из её тела.
Солнце находится позади относительно её головы, но блики на глазах расположены будто оно спереди.

Я бы ещё написал, но, кажется, придирок и так уже слишком много)
Практикуйся ;)
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This is very cute. (Well, it is Fluttershy, she is after all cute). But anyways, it is still cute. I love how she is holding her paintbrush and love the sky and grass. You also got everything about Fluttershy right too. Her eyes have to be my favorite about this. :meow:

The sunlight would be my second fave too, I love how it's shining on Fluttershy, giving her a glow. Very lovely and very beautiful. Honestly, everything about this is very adorable, very cute, very pretty, and very great job. That is all. Hope to see you do more.

So yeah, nice job.
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Pinetr33 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What program did ya use? It looks so cool!
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Sokolas Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's paint tool sai
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Pinetr33 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ohhh
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JahirCeja-90 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013
It's so very beautiful.
Amazing JobĦĦĦ
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Patrikov909 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Fluttershy: Do you like it? im so artistic
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RainbowFeather98 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Student Artist
You have such beautiful arts Could you tell me about me to draw?
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rabidsonic220 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
May I ask how you did the hair and grass?
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Sokolas Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The grass is pretty simple; I make a bunch of layers, select the basic brush, pick a few shades of green, and paint it. As for the hair... First I shade it as a solid object to make the general shape and then add additional strokes of darker/lighter shade to make it look like hair
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Pacman552 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Professional Filmographer
pero que mona es mi Flutty <3
but that monad is my Flutty <3
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Blackvegetable Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
Awwww... she's got talent! :aww:
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