I've tried to draw Princess again as well as use some techniques new for me. I think I'm getting more familiar with alicorns anatomy, though this picture is still way to far from canon. There's a version with slightly adjusted colors
Проблема с передними ногами и фоном, работа вроде ок, но размыленность заднего фона делает глаза больно. Так же-поблема с цветами и светотенью, вообще не понятно откуда что идет, куда падает свет и вообще в чем смысл жизни. Бликов на волоса добавил, и то лучше было бы :3 Работай далее, молодец!
This is a very lovely depiction of Luna. I really like the way her mane is drawn as non-starry. The color is a nice shade. I could see this artwork hanging up in Canterlot as a royal portrait. Fives across the board. I see nothing worth nit-picking over.
For those that can't read Russian, here's a Google Chrome translation of the other critique:
The problem with the front legs and the background, work like the app, but razmylennost the background makes my eyes hurt. Same-poblema with colors and light and shade, do not understand how that is where the light and in general what is the meaning of life. Highlights on the hair added, and it would be better: 3 running on, well done!
I prefer this version to the "slightly adjusted colors" version. Really nice and climatic piece of art! Although I prefer the realistic style from you, this is not so bad too. Her mane is not show accurate, but I like the way you build those hair - very realistic and complex hair. Also very good background! I like it's so blurr and climatic! Also, the critique sucks.
Tbh I'm not a fan of princesses' glowing sparkly manes, I prefer more... natural look. The critique is fine, the guy is just being honest, not insulting. I appreciate every critique and comment, positive and negative, because, after all, that's what helps me improve.