Now, the proper piece for Theme is A Pony Learning. This one is kinda obvious. I wanted to try some new things. And I should say a great THANK YOU to for his great help and tips.
I think I heard of MLP.FIM and this deviation on Twilight Sparkle is a great idea to match the theme 'A Pony in Learning'.
I guess this is her as a filly and I would first like to tell you how awesome it looks with the natural shading in the background and on the character.
I suggest you focus more on the body parts and the facial features as Twilight's eyelashes should be more curlier as in the episodes and you should make the neck a bit shorter if she's a filly.
But the rest of the picture is fine and keep up the good work!
Vision - Not bad. The pose looks kind of good, but there seems to be bits of problems. The angle of the paper or how it is positioned, the angle or the perspective of the ink bottle, and how the table seems to look unbalanced. Not saying that it should be perfect, at least you can learn from these mistakes, unless you repeat the same ones all over again.
Originality - Haven't seen much artworks similar to this, though. The pose, the style, the environment and the facial expression makes it looks kind of original, as I have not seen much similarity to some other artworks.
Technique - A bit awesome. I can see how this was colored in the simplest and the best way possible, and how the hair is shaded is kind of realistic (despite being a painting). I can see how simple details can be that realistic, and I recommend artists to not use excessive details.
Impact - Its simplicity has given me a new way on how to paint outrageously yet simply. The artwork itself is telling me that painting is never hard as long as you don't go through heavy detailing and excessive amounts of complex parts.
Overall - I like it, despite some minor errors. Keep up the good work, for God will help us all.
Actually, Twilight using RD's feather is not my idea, I've seen it in some comics, though I can't remember the name. As for the style... I don't think I have any particular style, at least I can't see it for me, every piece is different.
I guess this is her as a filly and I would first like to tell you how awesome it looks with the natural shading in the background and on the character.
I suggest you focus more on the body parts and the facial features as Twilight's eyelashes should be more curlier as in the episodes and you should make the neck a bit shorter if she's a filly.
But the rest of the picture is fine and keep up the good work!
Originality - Haven't seen much artworks similar to this, though. The pose, the style, the environment and the facial expression makes it looks kind of original, as I have not seen much similarity to some other artworks.
Technique - A bit awesome. I can see how this was colored in the simplest and the best way possible, and how the hair is shaded is kind of realistic (despite being a painting). I can see how simple details can be that realistic, and I recommend artists to not use excessive details.
Impact - Its simplicity has given me a new way on how to paint outrageously yet simply. The artwork itself is telling me that painting is never hard as long as you don't go through heavy detailing and excessive amounts of complex parts.
Overall - I like it, despite some minor errors. Keep up the good work, for God will help us all.
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